tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post114343260622528143..comments2023-10-28T02:28:10.835-05:00Comments on Flashes of Life: The prologue to my book InshallahSleepDepravedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11483688002609035266noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1154560693930028432006-08-02T18:18:00.000-05:002006-08-02T18:18:00.000-05:00asalamu alaikumwhat's a good author without a few ...asalamu alaikum<BR/><BR/>what's a good author without a few critics?<BR/><BR/>keep at it sis.They'll pretend to know you when your book is a best seller.Inspiredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00634784310828646080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1144116924147543942006-04-03T21:15:00.000-05:002006-04-03T21:15:00.000-05:00Salaam sista.....all the hating happenin aside i g...Salaam sista.....all the hating happenin aside i gotta say i like your prologue.<BR/>The last few lines........when u say she will never see her brother and mother...and that the wind has carried them away forever.......makes me think......asemayo kesho ni mwongo. Tommorow is not promised! I think am gonna go tell my family i love them!<BR/>Good luck with the book writting sis......inshaAllah we will be reading it soon.<BR/>peace!NATIVEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10805309807700530665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1144009364522823612006-04-02T15:22:00.000-05:002006-04-02T15:22:00.000-05:00I LOVED it, it even brought prickless of tears and...I LOVED it, it even brought prickless of tears and made me question who is the person holding her back, and why hasn't she noticed it yet so we can see. I'm looking forward to it...but I do agree about the punctuation, in all honesty it threw me off. Leyla your a beautiful writer mashallah keep it up, and hurry with the book I want to know how she overcomes her hardships, I'm a romantic at heart soo yeah lool.Leyla https://www.blogger.com/profile/13567190100620958377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1143738197852618552006-03-30T11:03:00.000-06:002006-03-30T11:03:00.000-06:00Oh look at these cowardly haters? G'luck SD.Oh look at these cowardly haters? <BR/><BR/>G'luck SD.Flower.of.Chaoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10885054638558826116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1143721154073195272006-03-30T06:19:00.000-06:002006-03-30T06:19:00.000-06:00i think there is a lot of truth about what the (si...i think there is a lot of truth about what the (sister or brother)??? is saying i guess that the sister/brother lauppphed so much that she/he probably decided to go with the PH (kkkkkkk) i guess you have to be SLEEPdepraved to come up with a such rotten prologueAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1143679077058697252006-03-29T18:37:00.000-06:002006-03-29T18:37:00.000-06:00A critic in the making aberrant. I will work on th...A critic in the making aberrant. I will work on the ponctuation (punctuation), syntax and coherency. :)<BR/><BR/>As for me not posting again dear I don't think you can tell me when to and when not to. Incase you ain't noticed the blog you just criticized is mine, hence I do what I want with it (To blog or not to blog as FOC puts it).<BR/><BR/>I am assuming you are a somali blogger. Wanna give us (poor writers) a looksie to your blog? FOC and I link somali blogs to our page. That is if you ain't embarrassed. <BR/><BR/>Ps:- I will try not to make you lauph (laugh) anymore. Cheers!SleepDepravedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11483688002609035266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1143549828120830562006-03-28T06:43:00.000-06:002006-03-28T06:43:00.000-06:00i told you .....you have a Tom clancy style of wri...i told you .....you have a Tom clancy style of writting....very goodAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1143463128021712082006-03-27T06:38:00.000-06:002006-03-27T06:38:00.000-06:00Masha Allah. Keep it up.Masha Allah. Keep it up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15838871.post-1143434926931153272006-03-26T22:48:00.000-06:002006-03-26T22:48:00.000-06:00Excellent, Oh god good I felt it, dunno what it is...Excellent, Oh god good I felt it, dunno what it is but i felt it that was very touching can't wait for full book!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com